New Semester New Me

Hello, as I start this critique class, let me tell you a little bit about myself, I am an avid digital artist and am versed in many Adobe products including Photoshop, Illustrator, and InDesign. I also dabble with Autodesk Maya and Zbrush, even Blender. I want to tell a story with my art, as I've written a book and want to illustrate it.
This semester I am working on telling my own story with a six page comic that I did last semester, Here is the work in progress and story...

here 

This includes my six page spread of just one little part in my book done in ink washes and tech pens. However, I want to color it this semester. So far, I've only colored one page but want to color all six pages.

My first page completed color comic. Enter my two original characters: Kat and April, they ascend up a dark ominous castle that is floating in the pitch black sky. They are dwarfed by the massive elegant door as it opens of its own accord...more to come!

I also want to showcase my work from other classes that have to do with story, including my character design project in commercial art IV. 

My inspiration includes: 

Final Fantasy

Inu-Yasha
King's Field 

And...

Harry Potter

This is a fantasy/action adventure comic.